Friday, October 22, 2010

Rain's Message

Rain's Message Copyright of Arslan Poetry Blog.


Oh!, beautiful rain,
Here you are again,

Using clouds to sing your sermon,
I wonder, whether a good or bad omen,


You make sounds, with clouds, big and small,
Incomprehensible sound, but heard by all,


Your wind sweeps through every through every window and corner,
You are forever boundless, from race, culture, and border, 


With cold water, you catch our attention, and bring us out,
Trying to convey your message, you shout and shout,


But, all you get are amazed faces,
Faces oblivious to your messages,


With wind in my face, drops in my hair, and your sound in my ears,
I wonder, how and why?, your message has been unheard of for many years,


Regardless, what we all wish for,
is that you will visit us once more,




Rain's Message Copyright of Arslan Poetry Blog.

29 comments:

  1. you've outdone yourself this time nigga.....ME LIKE

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  2. Thanks bro, your opinion means a lot to me....

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  3. oooh bro that was sumthng really awsum................HATZ OFFFFF maan......gr8 work

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  4. Thank You every one for your kind response...

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  5. Achak keep it up!

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  6. what is the rain's message???

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  7. the message might always remain a mystery....

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  8. im speechless =| ur getting better and better =D

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  9. Great work arsalan!

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  10. aala... buhat aala....

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  11. Nice work Man!!! Appreciated n Applause,,,

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  12. Great work dear, I like it, very nice and good one, mujay to ab pata chala kay tum poetry b kar laitay ho

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  13. Thank You Sir!, this was a hidden talent, = ), i just found recently....

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  14. Great work my dear friend, Nice poetry. I like rain so much. All the best for your good works.

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  15. gr8 man... keep it up... expecting more poetry from u man.....

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  16. hoping that natural processes will lasts give us a faith, faith in life. this one is, on my opinion, your best!

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  17. Thank You everyone for your kind words.... I really appreciate it

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