Saturday, November 19, 2011

awaited prize

Once again a poem from my collection of 6 months ago, I hope you enjoy the read :)



The yellow Star
as its spotlight
water dances
a fervent tango,

he battles
piercing through its pace
he waits, and waits more


at a corner by the current
like a tiger for his prey
ever ready,


drumming of the waves
penetrate his eardrums,
music at a distance
people dance to it
a celebration
he is not bothered,


sun-rays reflect
a magma ball
he doesn't flinch,


at the slightest nibble
he pulls with might
and sees the salsa
of the fish.




3 comments:

  1. you are too immature to write poems ,least to say. No connection among words.

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  2. I didnot got the theme of this poem . Would you like to explain it ?

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  3. (for anonymous 1) Well the poem is free verse so rhymes are not needed

    (for anonymous 2) The poem is about how a fisherman waits for the fish. The fish being the awaited prize :)

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