Monday, November 1, 2010

My Shining Star

My Shining Star Copyright of Arslan Poetry Blog.


Relentlessly, my heart beats fast,
Is it a phobia?,
This feeling, I get gazing upon you,
No, its euphoria,


Forever, I want it to last,
This experience, so bright,
If beauty is a shining star,
Then, you are its light,


My life's darkness, you illuminate,
With just a smile,
Gazing, how long has it been?,
I believe, quite a while,


No longer can I wait,
for you, to be mine,
No one comes close,
To your unrivaled shine,


From you, all that I covet,
One, single, look,
To read my emotions,
I am an open book,


Keep you happy, I shall, everlastingly, you bet,
Forever and ever,
Please be my shining star, in this dark sky,
Forever and ever,




My Shining Star Copyright of Arslan Poetry Blog.




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19 comments:

  1. Very nice work ,you are really a shining star.

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  2. very nice work ,you are really a shining star

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  3. how beautiful your poetry is...
    who is the lucky one that you want to be ur star?
    she must be very happy that you adore her that much..
    i like it very much

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  4. its really good, keep it up your good work

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  5. I just copied these verses and sent them to my girlfriend. She was thrilled. great job, keep it up!

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  6. I like this, I am very pleased with this poem is so touching the heart.
    Very nice work ,you are really a shining star.

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  7. Wow! i like how you wrote your verse there. nice shining poem! thanks very much :D

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  8. Wow! i like the way you wrote your lines and verse.. very nice shining poem! thanks :)

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  9. thanks for sharing and I'll keep following your stuff

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  10. Nice poen man! Kepp up the good work.
    Bilal from ABHC's page.

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  11. very nyc work frnd ...keep it up ....

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  12. Wow! this song is written by you? I like it. Good job !

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  13. By urban and robust, I mean wonderful.

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  14. Thank You everyone for your kind response

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